drawing head style and gesture

I was redrawing @lucjan_pakulski (art on instagram)

Okay, so the top image is a drawing i made by copying from one account that shows a lot of pictures of character design in his own style, I love his character design style. therefore I'm trying to make a copy of the image.

 My inspiration:https://instagram.com/lucjan_pakulski?igshid=sc0lvmoi7yk4